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Having "son" at the beginning would not "step on" your great punch line, like it does now. Consider moving it. Either way, it's a winner!
Thanks anon, but I don't really see what difference it would make?
That's fine. And, congratulations!
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Having "son" at the beginning would not "step on" your great punch line, like it does now. Consider moving it. Either way, it's a winner!
4:32am
Thanks anon, but I don't really see what difference it would make?
9:50am
That's fine. And, congratulations!
3:55pm