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"Attention, this vehicle is versing!"
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C CaMel Vote score: 8768C CaMel

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"Attention, this vehicle is versing!"

22/09/17 20:24:42

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Hi All, totally chuffed to be picked! Thank you to Chris for a brilliant site and to all fellow captioneers for the hilarious captions which keep me coming back for more!  --C CaMel
Jonathan Allsopp Vote score: 2803Jonathan Allsopp

Poet Lorryeate.

22/09/17 20:13:12

  
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C CaMel Vote score: 8768C CaMel

He should work on his delivery

22/09/17 21:28:59

  
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C CaMel Vote score: 8768C CaMel

Articulate Lorry

22/09/17 21:23:29

  
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Ian Skelding Vote score: 28264Ian Skelding

Parking meter.

22/09/17 20:27:15

  
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Mr Dome Vote score: 13842Mr Dome

I think the main issue with this 'rhyme' is the use of the phrase 'dirty but'. Surely his but should have started on line 4 of the verse, thus the co-ordinating conjunction then clearly shows the difference between the two statements whereas in the poem, it suggest he always has a dirty but. Obviously the use of a comma after 'dirty' would have helped. Would anyone like to offer an alternative critique to this otherwise mildly humorous ditty. Anon, maybe you would, perhaps..? More gin, anyone??

22/09/17 20:46:57

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Between caption and comments, I only understood gin. --Pete
Jonathan Allsopp Vote score: 2803Jonathan Allsopp

He's on his way to Limerick.

22/09/17 20:25:52

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Better than going to Lickerim? Maybe 😁 --Mr Dome
Dan Nicholls Vote score: 17206Dan Nicholls

The poem's bloody awful,
So's where you chose to stick it,
You're parked on double yellows too,
So have a f*cking ticket.

22/09/17 22:37:01

  
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