No .. I think it's fine the way it is ..other people might think different ...Personally I think it works better than "NASA Unveils New Rover" ...but that just me ..I think it's fine the way it is ..other opinions are just as valid without being offered a re-write.
Hi anon, it was really kind and generous of you to offer suggestions for improvement. Thank you stone face for liking the current caption as it is and reassuring anon there was no need to have deleted their comment. My apologies anon for not thanking you for your suggestions earlier.
Anon, I just found your thoughtful comment in an email so I've added it below. Just let me if know if you still want it deleted.
"˜...You have my vote. Suggestion: Putting extra words after "rover" makes it so you are stepping on your funny part. Consider, re-ordering the sentence, or just cutting out the last 5 words. Or, heck, I've gone this far...how about: "NASA Unveils New Rover." "˜
It'd be nice to know who you are - no need to post anonymously unless you're the caption author. Or you're a serial killer who's on the run, that I can understand- been there done that.
You know me, Stone Face: I am that woman in front of you at the check out, with "just a few things," FUMBLING with my bank card, so sorry to hold you up; I am the guy holding the door for you, so glad to be "of service" but NOTHING MORE, please; and I am that bird, singing in the tree, that goes silent when you get too close...Thank you for lingering there, looking...Listening.
Budgies are very intelligent. Chirpy could well have his own Twitter account. You don't know what he gets up to after you put the cover over his cage. I once had a budgie who was into politics. He was always shouting "Maggie Maggie Maggie Out Out Out!" You could say he was very left wing.
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I think it's fine the way it is.
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No .. I think it's fine the way it is ..other people might think different ...Personally I think it works better than "NASA Unveils New Rover" ...but that just me ..I think it's fine the way it is ..other opinions are just as valid without being offered a re-write.
9:48pm
You made a very good point. I will erase my earlier suggestions. Seriously. Thank you.
10:19pm
No ..you should've left your suggestions up..other people including the author might've agreed with you.
10:23pm
Hi anon, it was really kind and generous of you to offer suggestions for improvement. Thank you stone face for liking the current caption as it is and reassuring anon there was no need to have deleted their comment. My apologies anon for not thanking you for your suggestions earlier.
8:42am
Anon, I just found your thoughtful comment in an email so I've added it below. Just let me if know if you still want it deleted.
"˜...You have my vote. Suggestion: Putting extra words after "rover" makes it so you are stepping on your funny part. Consider, re-ordering the sentence, or just cutting out the last 5 words. Or, heck, I've gone this far...how about: "NASA Unveils New Rover." "˜
12:45pm
I'm back: You guys are THE BEST. This is like being part of a...functional family. Thank you for welcoming me...even with all my imperfections : )
12:38am
It'd be nice to know who you are - no need to post anonymously unless you're the caption author.
Or you're a serial killer who's on the run, that I can understand- been there done that.
6:42am
You know me, Stone Face: I am that woman in front of you at the check out, with "just a few things," FUMBLING with my bank card, so sorry to hold you up; I am the guy holding the door for you, so glad to be "of service" but NOTHING MORE, please; and I am that bird, singing in the tree, that goes silent when you get too close...Thank you for lingering there, looking...Listening.
12:32pm
Right so you could be my Auntie Edna or my Uncle Harold or even Chirpy my pet budgie ..
1:26pm
Budgies are very intelligent. Chirpy could well have his own Twitter account. You don't know what he gets up to after you put the cover over his cage. I once had a budgie who was into politics. He was always shouting "Maggie Maggie Maggie Out Out Out!" You could say he was very left wing.
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