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Yes, the use of enjambement with the conjunction creates a sense of anticipation, but also sets up the parallelism as seen with the repeated use of 'my'. Then again, it's written by someone with the mental age of a five year old.

[anon]
22/09/17
8:08pm

Fascinating... I had read it as if the forth line started with 'But'...

22/09/17
8:14pm

Between caption and comments, I only understood gin.

22/09/17
8:17pm

I find that the staccato use of single-syllable words in relation to the recurring themes of ownership and power relations (My boss, My work, my money etc) creates a powerful sense of resentment in their employment, let down by the fact that the poem is complete and utter shit.

22/09/17
8:18pm

For added pretension, note my use of the French enjambement. Compare with caesura. The hanging conjunction and lack of punctuation does create a momentary suspense. Or the typesetter was a twit and just centred everything. Where's my gin?

[anon]
22/09/17
8:18pm

I'm drinking it.

22/09/17
8:40pm

Pete - I laughed loads at your comment
MW - laughed even more at your last comment

Hilarious haha

(caption author)
22/09/17
10:05pm

Yes Tony is right. Only named captioneers get served gin 😊

(caption author)
23/09/17
6:47am

Thanks... think I need some black coffee.

23/09/17
6:52am

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